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-The Warehouse- by kaiverta -The Warehouse- by kaiverta
This is an old version of The Warehouse's beginning. You can find it revamped and resized in the four-page prologue.

The first page can be found here: [link]

Each new page will be linked at the bottom of the 'Artist's Comments' box.
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:iconmasterofthesquirls:
MasterOfTheSquirls Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
That looks like Kai a little bit :D
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GoddessGray Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2007
[link]
Adoration
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:iconzlynn:
ZLynn Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
This is interesting. Definitely following ;O

:D
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:iconwizard-angst:
Wizard-Angst Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2007
This is good. :)
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:iconseekmayhem:
SeekMayhem Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2007  Student General Artist
:D lol
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:iconcalysar:
Calysar Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2007
It's really well done! must read more...
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:iconmilk-cafe:
Milk-cafe Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2007
Wow, I wanna read more! :D
Looks like you're a great storyteller. ^^ Nice work!
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:iconojx:
OJX Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2007
Wow you have your own series going, nice job on the first one, good use of space and colours, I will read the rest when I have time :)
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:iconcatgirlartist:
catgirlartist Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:) more please! :popcorn:
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:iconvueiy-visarelli:
Vueiy-Visarelli Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks great! And intriguing. I'd DEFINITELY be interested in reading more. In fact, I'm going to check out the other pages right now...

:) :)
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:iconkaiverta:
kaiverta Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
Amigah. Amigah. ^^ THANKS SO MUCH! *adds you to the list* You're number 57. :D YAY.
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:iconnightmaregk13:
NightmareGK13 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Student Digital Artist
started reading it finally :D
(1st pag right?)
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:iconkaiverta:
kaiverta Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
Yessirreebob! ^^ Thanks for readiiiing~
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:iconalexanderthenate:
AlexanderTheNate Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007   Photographer
Nice. Color does this comic some good, and the effects on the top panels are very fitting.
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:iconblood--angels:
Blood--Angels Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007
Fiiiufiiiuu
Black hair and red eyes *-* UHUHUHU!!
Love it! Very well done!
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:iconkaiverta:
kaiverta Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
XDDD :glomp: Thanks so muuuch~
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EE- Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007
Ooh~~ *__* I like the top panel~ It does have a nice dreamy look about it, you're right~~ And I really like the colouring you've done on these pages~ >3< They are so pretty~! *__* *shimmers at it* Yeeey~~ I will read more when you have more pages (if I read now, I'll be wanting more and more and there won't be anymore x__x) Yeey~! :D
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The-Emerald-Dragon Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow man, you're talented O_O I absolutly LOVE the way you draw people, especailly Solitary!!! I read the 7 pages you have, man, you made him drop dead gorgeous!!!! Ironically enough, Solitary looks a lot like my character Damion and I do that same thing you do with the eyes X_X I leave everything black and white and colour only the eyes!!! I like your idea of only colouring the first page, I was actually thinking about doing that. Seems like your story is coing along nicely ^^
BTW, my comic's name is "DreamScape" and I was thinking about putting it up. (very reluctant). Tell me, has anyone stolen this yet? That's the main reason why I really don't wanna put mine up but I will put bios of my characters up shortly.
and, as promised, here's a smiley for keeping track of your story =D
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:iconkaiverta:
kaiverta Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
No one has stolen it, nope. And no one better. ^^ I've got official copyright laws on it. You can put it up if you want and just use the dA watermark on every page like I do. ^^ Thanks so much for your awesome comment!! ;;
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The-Emerald-Dragon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
So I'm safe as long as I have the dA waterwark...cool^^ I'll think about it.Like I said, for right now, I'm gonna put bios up.
And from your update of the dream pannels, Yes, it does give more of a "dreamy" feel to it.
I have a faded marker I use for that effect (Ya know when marker start dying, ya, I use the "fuzzy" look from that hehe =D)
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:iconnotice-me:
notice-me Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2007
wow, great artwork ^^
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:iconashleyjordan:
ashleyjordan Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh this looks good. I like his eyes and it seems like this is going to be interesting :D
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:iconviralsanctity:
viralsanctity Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007
Nice colouring job. 8D
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:iconwar-machine600:
war-machine600 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007
yes the comics i like good ;)
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:iconskitzomissa:
SkitzoMissa Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
luv ur style simply amzing :love:
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:iconviralsanctity:
viralsanctity Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
Oh my, he's got a mouth on him. xD
I love him already! heheh.
Like fanart?
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:icondasadam:
dasAdam Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2007
you got some great skills in painting faces ^^
gotta practice that too ....argh

nice manga! reading it goes really smoothly :nod:
u could add even more motion to the chars. in some situations the look a bit stiff. exaggeration is the key :)
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:iconorcusdei:
OrcusDei Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is great, looking forward to read others!
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:iconmotherofyou:
motherofyou Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007
cool! what's the meal?
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:iconsampdoria:
Sampdoria Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2007
Nice work! :)
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:iconeye2soul:
Eye2Soul Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2007
Sweet. I'm likin' it. You should indeed continue. n.n
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:icondove8k:
dove8k Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2007
I of course love it ^_^ You definately should put it up!
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:iconkaiverta:
kaiverta Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
Yay. XD Thanks everyone.
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:iconsable-ambiguity:
sable-ambiguity Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2007
First comment!

Gorgeous, lovely, yes. You know what I think.

And I claim teh sex in cell seven. |<
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:iconsable-ambiguity:
sable-ambiguity Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2007
Or...not. *emosniffle*
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:iconsamrin:
samrin Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol I like the character already =)
"I'm two hours not hungry"
lol
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:icondarkfawkes:
DarkFawkes Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2007
Wow that looks really professional looking :0
I'd like to read more ;D
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