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-T.W. CH.3. Pg, 06- by kaiverta -T.W. CH.3. Pg, 06- by kaiverta

IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN THE STORY, PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT WITH AT LEAST A SMILEY FACE ON IT, SO I CAN TRACK HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE FOLLOWING IT. THANK YOUUU. =D


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Solitary's hair bothered me for this page and the two before it. I'm not really sure why it was so damn hard to do. ><


Anyway, enjoy. n.n




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Also, check out: [link]

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Comments are appreciated.
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SO FAR:
THE WAREHOUSE:
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CHAPTER THREE:

Prev--> Page 5: [link]
Pres--> Page 6: [link] <-- You are here. ^-^
Next--> Page 7: [link]


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KEY:
Pres- Current page (present)
Prev- Previous page
Next- Next page (obviously ^^; )

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Whenever a page is finished, damn it. e.e; (But hopefully once a week >> )

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© 2009 TARA-LYNN SHARROCK
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SmokinCute Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, you already know that I follow it cause I told you xD :) It's awesome!
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Zylvee Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm loving the dialogue here. It's informative and yet selectively secretive, too, and its intrigue makes me anxious to read the next page. Especially with the hanging line, "Do you?"

There is a typo, though; at least, from what I see: "I'd personally try to avoid the bigger cities though ... " Maybe it's just a flow thing with me, but I feel like that 'to' belongs in there. Really your judgment, though, of course. [:

Also ... before I shush myself in anticipation, the larger bottom frame, where Solitary and ... Jim you called him? are sitting and standing, respectively, at the counter, the perspective seems a bit awry. There appear to be conflicting vanishing points between the counter itself, and the floor toward the opposite wall beneath the booth. The counter is 'vanishing' to one point, whereas the floor tiles/boards 'vanish' to another.

BUT ! This was not intended to sound nit-picky at all. I'm loving all of this, and I can't wait to read the next page. Those things just really seemed to stand out to me, and I thought you would appreciate the comments. Of course, if you don't, then feel free to ignore them. x;

Anyways. Looking forward to the next page! ;D
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Zylvee Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yes! I meant to add that I loved all the detail put into this, too -- like with his stubble, the color added to the bottles on the counter, and the texture in the furniture. [:
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Hyde0089 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Student General Artist
Hey, i started workn' on a manga of my own with a friend of mine. Do have any advice on making great manga like the warehouse?
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callie1066 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009
:) I'm enjoying it.
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sailorpichu86 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009
:)
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sable-ambiguity Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009
I think Krice's hair is amazing, so shh.

I don't know enough about the disciples yet, I guess, because I find it kind of...odd that this guy would be sort of badmouthing them (or at least, not portraying their actions and the government's as a whole in a positive light) to a complete stranger. I mean, how does he know Krice doesn't work for them? Like I said, maybe I just don't know enough about them yet, or the guy could really just be stupid or something, it just seems a bit of a stretch to me. Especially since he already noticed in the previous page that -something- seems off about Krice, whether it's in a good way or bad way.
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kaiverta Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
:wow: Thanks for your comment. But I can't tell you why Jim's telling Krice/Solitary what he is. That would be giving stuff away. x3 But he's not badmouthing the Disciples. He's just explaining what they're all about, basically.
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