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EDIT: I changed his clothing, and added highlights to his skin to make him look more... pop-outty. And yeesss, I know, his clothing's more boring now, but whatever. I think it looks better, personally.



IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN THE STORY, PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT WITH AT LEAST A SMILEY FACE ON IT, SO I CAN TRACK HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE FOLLOWING IT. THANK YOUUU. =D


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COMING SOON....

MAHAHAH! Anyway. Thanks to the people who made the awesome brushes and font that I used. If anyone recognizes who they belong to, please let me know so I can credit them. You'd think I'd learn to save their names by now. >>


Anyway, yes. Chapter Three is on its way, woooot!


That is all.


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SO FAR:
THE WAREHOUSE:
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CHAPTER TWO: CLEAN GETAWAY:

Prev--> Page 20: [link]

CHAPTER THREE:
Pres--> Chapter Cover: [link] <-- You are here. ^-^
Next--> Page 1: [link]



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KEY:
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Prev- Previous page
Next- Next page (obviously ^^; )

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:iconmadnsone:
woot!!! can't wait!
:iconblue-shadow24:
:)

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For a long time it gave me nightmares...
Having to witness an injustice like that.
It was a constant reminder of how unfair this world can be.
I can still hear them taunting him;
"Silly Rabbit, Trix are for kids."
:iconvueiy-visarelli:
:D :D Been waiting for more! Like the cover!

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Ignorance is death. I prefer to live.
:iconshhilja:
great drawing! And the hair looks awesome:D

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*listening to metal* "why.. are you listening to this angry music?"
"whaaaat? It makes me happy :bounce: "

my gallery: [link]
:iconmangaka-aspiration:
great illustration, hair looks slick, background works well with your character, I like your style!!
:iconnachman:
Hi, there.

I read your comic and feel stuck with it!!! ^^
I interrest your comic story. Realy!!!

I guest this must be the story about something base on the spy or mercenary organization or whatever.
The characters looks like they have been trained so well for combat and to be the killing machine!!!

The only four things that I wondering in this story is......

1. Does the Azriel, the Solidary's brother, died immediately in sudden attack of Humanoil-Like-Droid?
2. If Azriel still alive, do "Patient" and "Azriel" are the same person?
3. If Azriel is the "Patient", That means he will die by poisonous-execution. Still, do he survive from the execution? (probability for continue the mysterious of the character and story).
4. If Azriel is not the "Patient". In this case, he might die in the first question that I mentioned before. But if not, where is he and where does he go from now?

This little four mysterious that I still wondering. But I believe that if Azriel still alive, he may be the myth character for developing the story line.

But If he pass away, rest in peace.......it so glad to be free from the cruel life, so cruel, to be the killing machine!!!

In the case of Azriel is dead, the first chapter, the brotherhood, shows how cruel of the life and the consequence of treason in the organization.

That's what I thing of it when I read again and again. :)

Still, I like your work and waiting for seeing the next chapter.

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:iconkaiverta:
^^ Yay! Thanks so much for reading.

Okay.

Here are the answers to your questions.

1: Azriel died a few seconds after the humanoid type thing (In the manga, he's called a sentry) attacks him.

2: Azriel and Patience are the same person. Azriel is his real name, and Patience is his nickname. ^_^

3 and 4: Right now, it seems like Azriel/Patience is dead from the poisonous execution. I didn't have any plans to make him come back in later episodes of the story, which means he'll probably stay dead forever. Of course, were he NOT dead, I wouldn't tell anyone where he is because that would be a secret for later episodes! :P So we'll just have to wait and see what happens. ;)

Again, thanks so much for reading it. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. :aww:


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just commissioning to save to cut a demo. :3
:iconnachman:
Oh........Azriel's dead!!!

Little tragedy lost!!! Poor Patience.........

Anyway, thank you very much for your Hint. Now, I see more clear to understand what's going on in this story. :)
:iconelenoreloretje2:
aw dammit he's a hottie :D *drool drool

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