It isn't bad at all. I haven't finished reading yet ... I think it's good to have humour/double entendre. I was a Batman and Superman Comic fan as a kid - it's how I learnt to read. The stories were full of that sort of thing. Do you know about MONOMYTH? [link] That's a good start. JK Rowling is said to have used that structure too. It's the basic structure for success. I think it's deeply embedded in our genetic memory to want a monomyth. It may help with your structure if you don't already know about it.
This is really cool. I love Solitary's eyes and hair and how you were able to make 43 grasp his hair realisticly. Is this your story and have you written it out or is this a fanfiction made by somebody else? Also, if you did write a story about it, what is the link(if there is a link)?
Oooh...its' nice. Have you written a story of it? If not, I really think you should because then people following along can read it(you can post it on DA as a writing) and then maybe people would be even more interested and know what's going on(also, I don't know all of the character's names, even from looking through all of the pages...the only ones I kow is Solidary(sp?) and Forty Three). Anyways, thanks for replying and keep up the good work
Well, I'm doing it that way on purpose. Keeping people from knowing who is who. ^^ unfortunately, you can't really put names above characters' heads or in their speech bubbles in manga cause it looks funny, and they haven't all spoken yet, nor to each other, otherwise they'd mention names. But thanks for the suggestion. ^^ I'll let you know who is who in future pages, hopefully soon.
No problem. Also, I don't mind or even care if you are late in making a new page because I'm sure it takes a lot of work and time to make this comic. I also would rather have you take your time and make it great instead of rushing it...
I like that of only coloring the eyes... it gives it a ...something that I like nwn je...
and by the way, the link for the next page doesn't work. it says 'the file cannot be found' or something along the lines... T-T great work!
Flower: Wow, great tension. ^^ I love your style - the way only the eyes are coloured in... the characters are all easily distinguishable too. I'm loving the concept, too... looking forward to the next update~!