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Please comment. Feedback is most definitely welcome and suggestions will be taken into consideration. Though be polite about it. =D And PLEASE do not steal. >.<


Okay, so this was um.. way late. Like... six hours late. @_@ Sorry dudes and dudettes. Real life caught up with me. ^^; Anyway, hope you enjoy.

P.S.
I think because I was rushing to get this finished because I was running out of time and even OVER time, > >;;;, this page turned out looking just that; rushed. So I'll probably redraw it some time down the line. @_@



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THE WAREHOUSE:
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CHAPTER ONE: THE BROTHERHOOD:

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Pages updated every Thursday, hopefully. @_@

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SimoneStarr Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
:)
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Ebil-Rainbow-Ducky Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2009  Student General Artist
I've only read up to here so far, but I really like it :D
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PIMI1023 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008  Professional General Artist
43 !!!!! ahhhh
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wisewolf25 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
:)
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MasterOfTheSquirls Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
43 is crosseyed :D
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vilhelmina Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2007  Student Digital Artist
o_O
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NightmareGK13 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2007  Student Digital Artist
O.o liking it so far :D
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Vueiy-Visarelli Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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viralsanctity Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
This page looks very nice! D:
For something rushed like you said..Not so badly done that it would need to be redone..
You're really good at illustrating tension and suspense (one of those words, heh)
The second to last panel is such a nice shot of Solitary. <3
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hatefueled Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2007
wow! nice characters and eyes n stuff, very cool!
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dove8k Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2007
I admire your ability to add depth to the charaters in 2d - as in the way you shade muscles and such...

Poor smexy Krice! y_y
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Eye2Soul Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2007
Yes, this is a good cliff-hanger! Forty-Three looks way different from the other characters too, I can definitely recognise him. This is good.

:nod:

Also... The second last panel is my favourite. That's a gorgeous view of Krice. n.n
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sable-ambiguity Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2007
Even if this might have been rushed, I like the cliffhanger on this one a bit better than the last.

I mean... I don't like it. But I like it. It's so suspenseful.
And cruel. ;;
But that's the point. Gah. Krice. D:


Still engaging as always. <3
I can't wait for next week. ;;
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