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IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN THE STORY, PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT WITH AT LEAST A SMILEY FACE ON IT, SO I CAN TRACK HOW MANY PEOPLE ARE FOLLOWING IT. THANKS. :D :D :D
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EDIT: I PROMISE I will eventually remake this page. And maybe the next one, and the next... @_@
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Please comment. Feedback is most definitely welcome and suggestions will be taken into consideration. Though be polite about it. =D And PLEASE do not steal. >.<

Haw. =D



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SO FAR:
THE WAREHOUSE:
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CHAPTER ONE: THE BROTHERHOOD:

Prev--> Chapter Cover: None yet.
Pres--> Page 2: [link] <- You are here. ^-^
Next--> Page 3: [link]


Pages updated every Thursday.

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© 2007 TARA-LYNN SHARROCK
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SimoneStarr Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
:)
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AniteStar Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010
:)
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mizkittycat Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
your awsome at art, i'm jealous
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wisewolf25 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2008
:)
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MasterOfTheSquirls Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
I like the art :D
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vilhelmina Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2007  Student Digital Artist
Brainwashing much? o_O
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DiegoCrystal Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2007
:D hehe
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dragongirl91 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007
Great job! :D I'm keeping up with this! The story is intriguing..Ah my spelling X_X
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kaiverta Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
That's okay, your spelling is perfect. ^^; :cuddle:
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nerys Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007
This is genuinely intriguing. Sci-fi?
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NightmareGK13 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2007  Student Digital Artist
:D
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Vueiy-Visarelli Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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viralsanctity Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2007
Second row, first panel...The way his head turned to the right seems really unnatural to me.. D: Or maybe it's just me being a weirdo, lol.
This is really interesting! O__O
*Continues reading*
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Eye2Soul Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007
Very cool. =D

The illustrations are lovely as always. ;o) One thing I'd say though is I'm having a little trouble telling Krice apart from the other boys. Might wanna vary some of their appearances and hairstyles a little? But it still rocks.

Also, I'd use a cleaner, sans-serif font for the speech bubbles... Not sure that typeface fits with the style of illustration. Maybe look around at some printed manga for inspiration? Totally your call though. I still :heart: it.
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kaiverta Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2007  Hobbyist Artist
Dude. I friggin' know. It bugs the crap out of me when I struggle to make the boys look different from one another, but ah well. xD; Thanks for the input.
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dove8k Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2007
<3 <3 More more!
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sable-ambiguity Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2007
YAY. I love this, and you.

Keep working. :3
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